I made a video for Dscribe asking a bunch of cosplayers how they could afford their costumes.
I wrote an article on Dscribe about the backlash against the planned increase in Australian arms being sold to other countries.
I made a video on this news story for Dscribe. It’s available here: http://www.dscribe.net.au/2018/04/03/protesters-rally-against-duttons-policy-on-refugees/
I uploaded the review to Deakin University’s news website Dscribe. I’ll have multiple stories on that site and each time one gets uploaded I’ll put a link to this blog.
(Image courtesy of 20th Century Fox)
An interesting, politically challenging (as I am a woman) piece about how men cope with divorce, with a good human-interest angle that makes the hook work to draw the reader in. Multiple informative sources are used from experts to regular men affected by the issue, finding a perfect balance of human-interest and factual components. The quotes themselves are engaging, showing a clear sign of excellent interview questions. The statistic about women initiating divorce 64 percent of the time is from a reputable source in the form of the Australian Bureau of Statistics, adding credibility to the story. The story uses mostly simple language, making it a breeze to read. The repetition of the words “handshake” and “hug” gives the reader a sense of satisfaction by the end of the piece, working like bookends to contrast how men have changed after getting the support they need.
I’ve decided to post short reviews of feature stories I’ve read for my Feature Writing Class. Some of these I wrote for that class but in the future, I plan on uploading reviews of my own accord.
A fascinating story that had me hooked from the attention-grabbing title to the sobering and poetic ending. I kept on reading because the hook succeeded in making me want to find out more. The structure was so satisfying that it made me continue reading even after my biggest question (How did the death happen?) was answered. The story uses relevant sources such as the people responsible for the death at a fraternity hazing as well as the mother of the deceased man. Most of the interviewee quotes revealed interesting information and even the silence of the people who refused to be interviewed spoke volumes about the intersections between race and attitudes towards crime. This is further highlighted by the brief insights into the journalist’s own life, such as when he mentions how he told someone that “if [he] had been charged with murder, [he] would have faked [his] death so [his] parents wouldn’t know.” However, these insights illuminate the story rather than distract from it. The story has a good mixture of facts and human-interest components.